Wednesday 26 June 2013

The Production


The Production


Darkness trapped everyone. The last few room 5 people strolled off the stage, anxiously we dashed onto stage. It was strange knowing that one of the people dashing onto the stage was me. The darkness was intimidating us. The curtain was an angel rising to the heavens. I lifted my arm up and got into position. The parade of music started. We all automatically started grooving to the music. An army of people gazed at our outstanding dancing. We hip hopped to the music . “Feel the power of love!” We chanted. We did our final position then the lights went out. We were amazing, outstanding, jaw dropping, we blew the parents and the teachers away. I heard a storm of applause.


by Josiah Nanguzgambo



“Nervous”

Purpose: To share an event about a time when you completed or saw someone complete something amazing!
WALT: Entertain (recount)
Task: To write a recount based on our Matariki Concert, using “The Man Who Walked Between Two Towers” as motivation.

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