Thursday, 27 February 2014

Swimming sports reflection

WALT: Evaluate our learning honestly
Task: Reflect on your efforts at swimming sports day
Success Criteria:
  • Use an image here.
  • Answer questions honestly.
  • Use correct spelling and punctuation.
  • Ask your learning partner to write you some feedback. Remember Austin’s Butterfly.
  1. What are you most proud of at swimming sports and why?
     I’m most proud that I cheered on kiwi house loudly and encouraged everyone.



  1. What challenged you the most and Why?
      What challenged me was building up my self confidence.



  1. How did you show kotahitanga?
      By cheering people on who aren't even in my house group



  1. Next time, what is a goal you can work towards?
      Next time I want to try my very hardest because I don’t think I tried my very       best when I swam. I’ll achieve this by striving for excellence.



Peer Comment: Awesome Josiah! I love how you said why and how you
achieved your goal. Well done. Salah
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Tuesday, 25 February 2014

Man at sea (edited)

Tuesday the 25 February
Man at sea
WALT: Edit
Jose Salvador is a man who claims to have been lost at sea for more than one year dew to a fishing trip that went terribly wrong. He said he survived on fish, birds and turtles he caught with his bare hands. And he also drank turtle blood and rain water. He was found washed up alone with a bushy beard and ragged clothes 8,000 miles from home on a tiny Pacific island called Ebon. Josie a companion set sail from mexico in 2012 it is believed that Jose's friend had died. I think that Jose was telling the truth about this. The positives about this is he learnt how to survive at difficult times.

Monday, 17 February 2014

Values

Josiah=$62
$100 words
Whatever = 102
Rongyu=$100
kyrgyzstan=$169
Chad=$15

Sunday, 16 February 2014

Man at sea (Draft 1)

Jose Salvador is a man who claims to have been lost at sea for more than one year. He said he survived on fish, birds and turtles he caught with his bare hands. And he also drank turtle blood and rain water. I agree that he was washed up for more than a year. The positives about this is he learnt how to survive in a shipwreck.

Kotahitanga