WALT:Persuade

Coke

Introduction: I think coke isn’t good for your teeth. Because if you drink coke right before you brush your teeth you're just going to be brushing the sugar from the coke onto your gums and brushing it on your other teeth.

If you drink it as an everyday drink your body will be filled with sugar and you’ll be more hyper than a herd of running cheetahs.

Coke should not have been ever invented. And it has those very poisonous venomous fizzpopling bubbles. E9 have actually proved that coke is very bad, yeah, we proved it all right.

On the last day of school before the holidays we put an egg in a glass of coke, and another egg in a glass of water. Then we left it there over the holidays and when we came back to school we found the egg in the water absolutely perfect still edible. Then we found the egg in the coke with mould on it and it became darker. Now imagine what would would happen to your teeth. You know what I mean?

So you can drink coke everyday for the rest of your very sad life if you want to. But it will lead to a very fatal end for you. So do you still want to drink coke every day? Don’t say I didn’t warn you....