Monday 17 March 2014

Camp draft 1

Camp

Darkness had swallowed the bright blue sky. The cold had stolen all of the suns heat away. Moths flew aimlessly in every direction possible. I was in my zebra onesey walking silently back to my cabin ready for lights out. I was a fat cat coated in his puffy warm fur. Ebony’s and Nick’s class were at highland home camp for a week. When I got to my cabin I climbed up the ladder trying to be as quiet as I could. Then I  got into my bunk bed, and I was out cold.

1 comment:

  1. Well done Josiah I like how you used your personification next time you could use some alliteration

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